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1 分词结构
1工业活动(industrial activity) 和房地产开发(housing development)正在侵蚀(encroach on) 动物栖息地，导致他们迁移到(move)其他地方(force)。
学生的句子：Industrial activities and estate explorations are constantly encroaching on animal habitats, which result in their migrations to other places.
错误的原因：estate explorations，用词不当；定语从句先行词不清晰。
提升的句子：Industrial activity and housing development are encroaching on the habitat of animals, forcing them to move to other regions.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：Industrial activity and housing development
谓语（助动词 动词）：are encroaching on
宾语 (名词) ：the habitat
定语（介宾短语）：of animals
状语（分词）：forcing them to move to other regions
2远程工作(working remotely)虽然可以减少办公室成本(office costs)，但是却有其他的问题，譬如说，沟通困难(communication difficulty)和凝聚力不够(low cohesion)。
学生的句子：Although distant working can reduce office costs, there are other relevant problems including the difficulty in communication and the lack of a sense of community.
错误的原因：there are体现不出和远程工作的联系，sense of community 没有这个说法。
提升的句子：While reducing office costs, working remotely can cause some other problems such as communication difficulty and low cohesion.
句子结构分析：
主语 (动名词)：working remotely
谓语（情态动词 动词）：can cause
宾语 (名词) ：some other problems
状语（分词）：While reducing office costs
插入语：such as communication difficulty and low cohesion
3政府没有那么多钱(funding)去开(run)那么多(numerous)医院，所以只能允许(necessitating )医疗服务(medical services)的私有化(privatization)。
学生的句子：government do not have enough money to open plenty of hospitals,thereby only allow privatization of medical services.
错误的原因：主谓不一致；thereby后面要加doing
提升的句子：The government does not have funding to run numerous hospitals, thereby necessitating privatisation of medical services.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：The government
谓语（助动词 动词）：does not have
宾语 (名词) ：funding
状语（不定式）：to run numerous hospitals
状语（分词）：thereby necessitating privatisation of medical services
4全球变暖(global warming)会导致某些植物的生长茂盛或者是死亡(either flourish or perish)，从而影响吃这些植物的动物种群大小(populations of predators)。
学生的句子：global warming will lead to the flourish or death of some plants，and make big impact to the group size of the animal which feeding on those plants.
错误的原因：floursih 是动词，不能充当宾语；impact的介词是on；定语从句谓语不完整。
提升的句子：Global warming has made plants either flourish or perish, thereby affecting the populations of predators.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：Global warming
谓语（助动词 动词）：has made
宾语 (名词) ：plants
表语（名词、形容词、介宾短语）：
补语（动词）：either flourish or perish
状语（分词）：affecting the populations of predators
5自然灾难(natural disasters)的新闻报道(News coverage)可能会导致大家反应过激(overreact)，不利于(making it difficult)当局(authorities)做(deal with )善后工作(aftermath)。
学生的句子：People may overreact to reports on natural disarstures , which tends to be a challenge for the authorities to deal with them.
错误的原因：定语从句的先行词不清晰。
提升的句子：News coverage of natural disasters may cause people to overreact, making it difficult for authorities to deal with aftermath.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：News coverage
定语（介宾短语）：of natural disasters
谓语（情态动词 动词）：may cause
宾语 (名词) ：people
补语（不定式）：to overreact
状语（分词）：making it difficult for authorities to deal with aftermath
6当人们回到工作场所时，他们还沉浸(still)在节日的气氛(holiday mood)中。
学生的句子：when people return to work, they still immerse in the holiday mood.
错误的原因：固定搭配错误immerse oneself in sth。
提升的句子：People are still in a holiday mood when returning to workplaces.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：People
谓语（系动词）：are
补语（介宾短语）：in a holiday
状语（副词）：still
状语从句：when returning to workplaces
连词：when
7他将自己做义工(unpaid work)的视频(videos)发到(upload)网络( online)，吸粉无数(gain countless followers)。
学生的句子：He posted the video of his volunteering experience on social media and has gained tons of followers.
错误的原因：并列结构的时态不一致，不够通顺。
提升的句子：He uploaded his video of doing unpaid work online, gaining countless followers.
句子结构分析：
主语（代词）：He
谓语（动词）：uploaded
定语（代词）：his
宾语（名词）：video
定语（介宾短语）：of doing unpaid work
状语（副词）：online
状语（分词）：gaining countless followers.
8(容易)生活在一个快速消费的时代(throw-away culture)里，我们很少(seldom)将一个手机或者其他电子产品( electronic devices)用很久(for longer)。
学生的句子：Lived in a throw-away society, we seldom use a mobile phone or other electronic devices for a long time.
错误的原因：live不及物动词，没有被动，不可能在句首以过去分词形式出现。
提升的句子：Living in a throw-away culture, we seldom keep a mobile phone or other electronic devices for longer.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：we
谓语（动词）：keep
宾语 (名词) ：phone, other electronic devices
定语（形容词）：mobile
状语（副词、分词）：Living in a throw-away culture, seldom
9政府能够通过实施法律(enforce laws)来惩罚和震慑(deter)商业犯罪( illegal business practices)，来创造一个更好的经商环境(healthy business environment)。
学生的句子：laws can be used by the government to prevent commercial crimes, which in turn will create a better environment for operating business.
错误的原因：定语从句尽量修饰名词
提升的句子：The government can enforce laws to punish and deter illegal business practices, thereby creating a healthy business environment.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：government
谓语（情态动词 动词）：can enforce
宾语 (名词) ：laws
状语（分词、不定式）：to punish and deter illegal business practices, thereby creating a healthy business environment
10(容易)渐进税(progressive tax)可以减少贫富差距(close the gap between rich and poor)，建立一个平等的社会(equal society)。
学生的句子：Progressive tax can contribute to reduce the gap between rich and poor, thus building a fair society.
错误的原因：contribute to只能加名词作为宾语
提升的句子：The progressive tax can close the gap between rich and poor, thus building an equal society.
句子结构分析：
主语 (名词)：tax
谓语（情态动词 动词）：can close
宾语 (名词) ：gap
定语（形容词、介宾短语）：progressive, between rich and poor
状语（分词）：thus building an equal society
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